The Missing Teens: First Draft Feedback

My team presented our first draft, and we were told to improve the following items:

- Fix the audio mixing
- Add a voice over
- Add in more footage
- Add sound effects
- remove end credits
- make film longer
- fix volume issues

My team and I set out to tackle the various issues with the film that we identified during review. The first issue on our list was audio mixing, which we addressed by ensuring the background music did not overpower the actors' dialogue. We also added a voice over to the film to provide necessary context for the viewer and enhance overall quality. To make the film longer, we shot more footage to fully tell the story, ensuring that the audience had enough time to develop a connection to the characters. We also added sound effects to streamline the audio mix and enhance the flow of the story. To also further improve the quality of the film, we removed the end credits, preventing any distractions for the viewer. We also focused on fixing any remaining volume issues that could affect accessibility.